Self Critique: I think my experience working with Morpheus was a bit simpler than the last project. However, moving the arm joints was my biggest struggle. I think my biggest strength was my portrayal of the emotions I received. Overall, I think I did much better than the last project and I’m proud of the outcome.
-Smooth hand animation
-Flash of smirk at the end emphasizes devious emotion
-Head tilted too far
-For devious, there should’ve been an eyebrow raise to further emphasize the emotion
-When throwing the toy, the arm should’ve gone further, especially since the person is a child
-Blinking error: lower eyelid went up, rather than upper eyelid going down
-Devious is portrayed well
-Smile at the end could’ve been curved more
Who is your character?
Name: Aeden Fitzgerald
Birthday: March 29th
Appearance: Brown hair, caramel colored skin, kind of chubby
Relationship with others: A bit hostile relationship towards parents who attempt to refuse his bratty demands; disastrous relationship with younger brother due to jealousy.
Personality: Aeden is one of those impatient kids who start kicking and screaming when mommy doesn’t buy them a toy they see in the toy store. He also gets what he wants a majority of the time due to being the first born despite his parents constant desire to not succumb to his greedy wants. He gets what he wants due to his to parents attempt of diffusing his awful temper tantrums.
History: Aeden was always center of his parents attention but since the birth of his brother, he’s been feeling neglected and has been twice as demanding and twice as bratty.
Major Goal: No career in mind quite yet; major goal during this moment is to get the cookie he so desperately wants before dinner.
Motivation: To become the center of attention again.
Flaws: Awful temper, spoiled, bratty, disrespectful towards parents.
Strengths: Primary strength is his temper tantrums, which usually gets him what he wants.
When is your story taking place? : This story takes place in the Fitzgerald household moments before dinner. Aeden wants to have a cookie before dinner but his parents refuse because they don’t want him to spoil his dinner with sweets. This angers Aeden because of his past of always getting what he wants, however, he has a glimpse of the cookie jar and decides he’s just going to steal one.
Where is your story taking place? : Fitzgerald household.
What is the tone? : The tone/atmosphere appears to be a bit tense due to Aeden’s frustration, however it gets a bit more relaxed as he gets an idea.